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How does this look for a resume?
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Penz
Junior Member M
Registered: Jan 2004 Location: Country: United States State: Certifications: Working on:
Total Posts: 7
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How does this look for a resume?
I am trying to land a job with some nearby computer stores or maybe a business. I have no actual on the job computer expierence besides the 7 Microsoft classes I took at college throughout last year.
how can I make it more appealing?
i'm tired of making pizzas at the family business!
Objective:
Networking and/or technical support
Education:
Dover High School Graduate, 2002
Attending Kent State University – Tuscarawas Campus
BS in Computer Science and Technology, Expected 5/06
Concentration in Networking
Vice President of the Computer Club
Current GPA: 3.4 (A = 4.0)
Certification:
MCP (Microsoft Certified Professional in Windows 2000), January 16, 2004
Computer Skills:
-Advanced in Windows 2000, and familiar with 95/NT4/98/ME/XP.
-Took training courses at Kent State to help me towards achieving MCSA, and MCSE certification in Windows 2000.
-Courses started in January 03 and ended in December 03.
-Installed various operating systems, setup networks,
and troubleshooted problems. -Worked with DNS, DHCP, Active Directory, RIS, TCP/IP and other services related to Windows 2000.
-Now studying books and software to achieve MCSE.
-Currently taking an A+ hardware/OS Certification course and a Network+ Certification courses.
-Setup a home network and administer it.
-Successfully built a computer for myself.
-Educated in Microsoft Works.
-Quick learner with computers.
Honors and Achievements:
Dean’s List
High School Attendance, Absent Only 2 Days
Merit Roll 9th, 10th, 11th, 12th
Honor Roll 11th, 12th
Work Experience:
Penso’s Pizza – Dover
1996-Present
All Areas
References:
Available upon request.
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01-21-04 12:15 AM
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tucker2140
Member M
Registered: Jan 2004 Location: Kingston Country: Canada State: Certifications: MCSA 2000, security+ Working on: 216, 217, 220
Total Posts: 44
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01-21-04 04:55 PM
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smrkdown
Senior Member M

Registered: Dec 2003 Location: Country: United States State: Certifications: A+, Network+, Linux+, CCNA Working on: (3 of 4) CCNP, CCIE
Total Posts: 845
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I'd take a look at some resume samples on the web to get a feel for the level of professionalism that you should strive for but you're got a start. When I wanted a job at the local computer store, I wrote them a testing program to evaluate the knowledge of the test taker in the areas of computer hardware and software. I guess that worked because I got the job.
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01-22-04 01:43 AM
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jackiechan
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Registered: Sep 2001 Location: Country: Albania State: Certifications: MCSE Working on:
Total Posts: 309
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01-22-04 03:33 PM
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Spides
Never stop a volunteer. M

Registered: May 2000 Location: Country: United Kingdom State: Certifications: MCSE 2k, MCSA 2k + Messaging and CCNA Working on: HP ASE MCSE 2003
Total Posts: 559
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01-22-04 03:52 PM
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tucker2140
Member M
Registered: Jan 2004 Location: Kingston Country: Canada State: Certifications: MCSA 2000, security+ Working on: 216, 217, 220
Total Posts: 44
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Way to encourage people with thier job search jackiechan. Your a small and sad person if you make posts just to discourage others.
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01-22-04 04:23 PM
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Gundyman
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Registered: Dec 2000 Location: NY Country: United States State: Certifications: Working on: MCSA 2000
Total Posts: 555
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More the college up before HS
Maybe add a Interest section
On the computer skills section, put down the system/HW/SW u know. Be careful about what you put down. DNS/RIS... from classroom/training... Are u sure u know them?
Take A+/N+ to the Certification section and put (in process) at the end
Good Luck,,
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01-24-04 10:42 PM
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Penz
Junior Member M
Registered: Jan 2004 Location: Country: United States State: Certifications: Working on:
Total Posts: 7
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thanks for the replies. Well, except for that one idiot.
Hopefully I can land something soon. Just need to get my foot in the door.
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01-27-04 12:53 AM
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darthw
Long Live Savatage! M
Registered: May 2000 Location: Tulsa Country: USA State: Certifications: MCSE NT4, A+, N+, i-N+, CDIA+, CCA, S+, CNA, CNE, Proj.+, MCNE, HTI+, MCDST, Sec+, CIW-A Working on: MCSA and MCSE 2k3
Total Posts: 931
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Penz,
Some wording changes:
"Attended MCSA/MCSE courses at Kent State University from January, 2003 to December, 2003". Notice the use of the snappier term "Attended", rather than simply "took".
Instead of "troubleshooted", try "resolved". Sounds better.
How about "Now pursuing MCSE" instead of "studying books and software to...."?
Use "Currently attending A+/Network+ certification courses." Anyone who knows what A+ and N+ is will know it entails hardware and OS.
Most of these wording changes are meant to enhance and impress on that first pass through. The wider range of vocabulary you use on a resume, and the more succinct the wording the more impressed the reader will be. For example, the word "took" is somewhat slang for "attended";"took" is used in a variety of contexts, but it really means something like "taking possession", not attending a class.
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01-27-04 01:19 AM
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stecal
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Registered: May 2001 Location: Country: USA State: Certifications: Working on:
Total Posts: 77
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01-29-04 12:56 AM
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